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princess annaprincess anna Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
edited October 1, 2007 in People
These was taken today & i've entered the first in the last photographer standing competitions. Just wanted to get your comments.

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  • Yuri PautovYuri Pautov Registered Users Posts: 1,918 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2007
    Oh, what a beautiful model!
    Oh, what a creative photographer!
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  • saurorasaurora Registered Users Posts: 4,320 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2007
    Nice variety of poses and very inventive. I particularly like #1 and #4. Since you are entering #1 in the LPS which is ending tonight, I feel the shot could use a curve adjustment for contrast to brighten up her face and whiten her eyes. It appears a little muddy as processed. I'm not sure what software you are using to process or if these shots are straight out of the camera. They are dark and the cyan values are way off making the skin appear gray and lifeless. There is a great tutorial here if you need help with the numbers for pleasing skin tones. I played with these shots and they work up quite nice with some number tweaking. Over-all I like your style.
  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2007
    Yuri Pautov wrote:
    Oh, what a beautiful model!
    Oh, what a creative photographer!
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  • jeffreaux2jeffreaux2 Registered Users Posts: 4,762 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2007
    Very nice. Especially no.2 ( can't help it I am a guy!!), and no.5. Love the DOF in 5.....perfect!
    Thanks,
    Jeff
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  • princess annaprincess anna Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
    edited October 1, 2007
    Thanks for all your comments and Jeff the model is only 15, careful !

    I appreciate your feedback.

    Thanks all
  • evorywareevoryware Registered Users Posts: 1,330 Major grins
    edited October 1, 2007
    15 or not, #2 and 4 I really like. thumb.gif
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