Reflection in Boston

davemondavemon Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
edited March 25, 2004 in People
I took this shot of my family this weekend. I have tried cropping the edges off to remove the sides of the window... and softening the edges... but I am not really happy with it. I am posting it here because this shot "speaks" to me and I like it as is but feel there is more there. What should I try?

Dave

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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited March 13, 2004
    A little predictable, but here's a suggestion. I don't think you can have the balance you do, in the shot. Something has to give, in order for the other to be dominant.

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  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,948 moderator
    edited March 13, 2004
    davemon wrote:
    I took this shot of my family this weekend. I have tried cropping the edges off to remove the sides of the window... and softening the edges... but I am not really happy with it. I am posting it here because this shot "speaks" to me and I like it as is but feel there is more there. What should I try?

    Dave
    I get both family and neighborhood vibes from this. So I gave it a slightly
    different crop. I wanted to keep the reflection of the neighborhood, the
    market and the Boston sign. At the same time, lose the stuff in people's
    hands.

    Hopefully, you'll like this version.
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  • davemondavemon Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
    edited March 14, 2004
    I like both of these and like Ian408's the best of them. Still wish I could sneak in the top of the buildings in the reflection with the tree but it doesn't work to my eye. I guess I should have taken a better shot. ;)

    Thanks!

    I am new here and really enjoying looking at other's photos and work... I think that is my favorite bit about pictures, the simple act of perusing them.

    Dave
    ian408 wrote:
    I get both family and neighborhood vibes from this. So I gave it a slightly
    different crop. I wanted to keep the reflection of the neighborhood, the
    market and the Boston sign. At the same time, lose the stuff in people's
    hands.

    Hopefully, you'll like this version.
  • Richard CabesaRichard Cabesa Registered Users Posts: 155 Major grins
    edited March 14, 2004
    I think Ian got the crop right on thumb.gif I like it

    and welcome Dave.
  • gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited March 15, 2004
    welcome to the group dave....they look like very friendly people. thumb.gif
  • davemondavemon Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
    edited March 16, 2004
    Yeah, nice job Ian. I do like that one the best. I will stop by as often as I can and check out the pictures and try to say away from the new equipment lust forums. :) Thanks for the welcome!

    Dave
  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,948 moderator
    edited March 17, 2004
    davemon wrote:
    Yeah, nice job Ian. I do like that one the best. I will stop by as often as I can and check out the pictures and try to say away from the new equipment lust forums. :) Thanks for the welcome!

    Dave
    Dave,

    It all starts with a good original!

    Look forward to seeing more images.

    Ian
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  • peachmaanpeachmaan Registered Users Posts: 104 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2004
    davemon wrote:
    Still wish I could sneak in the top of the buildings in the reflection with the tree but it doesn't work to my eye.
    Dave

    Just cropped it after your instructions...
  • davemondavemon Registered Users Posts: 10 Big grins
    edited March 25, 2004
    Looking at Peachman's version I think between his and Ian's it comes down to taste. Thanks again to all. I will try and read this forum every two weeks if not more regularly. I love some of the shots I have seen. I am going to try some city shots myself now.

    Dave Spragg
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