Ch 33

John MuellerJohn Mueller Registered Users Posts: 2,555 Major grins
edited March 4, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
Been playing with this one.Havent got what I want.
Want to title it "My Heart" or "Her Heart"
Thoughts? Does it show emotion?
John

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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited March 4, 2005
    It's a nice shot with some cool PS. But I don't get any emotion out of it.
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  • JennyJenny Registered Users Posts: 96 Big grins
    edited March 4, 2005
    I agree. This is a really cool shot, but I don't really think the lock or fence is feeling any emotion, and I don't really feel an overpowering emotion looking at it either.ne_nau.gif
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited March 4, 2005
    it's a nice shot and a cool idea but execution and presentation will make or break this. What's the perfect title? Should you incorporate the title into the photo?
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  • John MuellerJohn Mueller Registered Users Posts: 2,555 Major grins
    edited March 4, 2005
    Aw,the emotion of no emotion around my heart:D
    Maybe this would be better off in the mini thingy thats coming up nextne_nau.gif
    Thanks,John
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  • KhaosKhaos Registered Users Posts: 2,435 Major grins
    edited March 4, 2005
    I think for minimalism you need to either go with the lock or the fence, not both.
  • joechiujoechiu Registered Users Posts: 60 Big grins
    edited March 4, 2005
    Hi MHJS,
    I like the look. However, the fringes on the interface between the chain/lock and the background pops out at me on my monitor. It seems like you may need to feather and/or shink the selection area and touch up the whites, replacing it so that it's more consistent with the darker background.
    Also, conceptually, the lock around the chain link doesn't work very well since the lock isn't really locking anything.
    I'd like to see what you can do with this!
    Joseph
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