This weeks seniors Takara,Sabrina,Tasha

zoomer

Still working on the mysteries of lighting. As you know small changes in the lighting make a big diff in the photos. All shot with 1 on camera flash using light fill flash and using ambient lighting to create the shadow detail.
Except for Tasha, the blond girl who was shot at midday where I had to use much more flash, it was also pretty windy so her hair was a bit wild but I like it that way.

evoryware

Wow!

I really like 1, 2 and 5! Looks like red-eye in 3?

zoomer

I did a recrop and rework on the first photo of Takara. I like this one much better.

evoryware

looks nice. Only other suggestion is isolate and take out some of the blue in her hair?

Chrissiebeez_NL

hey zoomer!

yeah, i like that one better as well, the colours pop more. did you use curves for that?

Owen

The skin softening/blurring is too much!

rwells

zoomer wrote:

I did a recrop and rework on the first photo of Takara. I like this one much better.

Zoomer,

I like this version better also. I find the arm/skin on the left distracting, but wouldn't be much of an issue with some vignette, which would also help drive your eyes to her eyes/face, which of course is the most important thing. IMHO.

Good job

JESTER

Zoomer, I like the reworked one better also. All of them are nice. Are these seniors in a modeling school ? You are giving Yuri a run for his money with the beautiful girls.

Tee Why

Overall, I think they look nice. One thing to watch out for is whitening the eyes, except for the first shot, they seems abit too white in the rest of the shots.