Subject very interesting, colors nice and vibrant. Perhaps the highlights on the near forearm could be toned down a bit with curves, blending, a second RAW conversion, etc. But no big deal.
The composition isn't as strong as I'd like. Perhaps there is a crop that fixes this? I played a little and got this:
Play with it, I'll bet you can do better than I did.
I think Rutt is right, about a different crop. I'm on my wife's laptop at the moment and because of the display size, I wasn't sure what I was looking at, at first.
I would either want to see more verticle to see a big body on a little "body", or a tight head to head.
Colour is pretty good. Maybe sharpen a bit for the final size.
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The composition isn't as strong as I'd like. Perhaps there is a crop that fixes this? I played a little and got this:
Play with it, I'll bet you can do better than I did.
I would either want to see more verticle to see a big body on a little "body", or a tight head to head.
Colour is pretty good. Maybe sharpen a bit for the final size.
Brad
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