Critiques Wanted

imaximax Registered Users Posts: 691 Major grins
edited March 5, 2005 in People
Entering A Contest With This Photo and want honest opinions about what you think about it. Thanks in Advance For Any Feedback.

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Comments

  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited March 5, 2005
    Subject very interesting, colors nice and vibrant. Perhaps the highlights on the near forearm could be toned down a bit with curves, blending, a second RAW conversion, etc. But no big deal.

    The composition isn't as strong as I'd like. Perhaps there is a crop that fixes this? I played a little and got this:

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    Play with it, I'll bet you can do better than I did.
    If not now, when?
  • digismiledigismile Registered Users Posts: 955 Major grins
    edited March 5, 2005
    I think Rutt is right, about a different crop. I'm on my wife's laptop at the moment and because of the display size, I wasn't sure what I was looking at, at first.

    I would either want to see more verticle to see a big body on a little "body", or a tight head to head.

    Colour is pretty good. Maybe sharpen a bit for the final size.

    Brad
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