School pick-up

asawan

I'm just beginning to get into photography...my husband's been pushing me for years and finally succeeded last week. So I took his 5D and took some shots. All comments and critique would be greatly appreciated! -Armida

macmac

The motion in your subjects feet is good. It gives the idea of motion. The people blurred in the back ground is nice. It give some depth. I think I would like the photo a little better if the subjects were just a little further into the picture. A lower camera level would add too...I think.
Good picture! Keep shooting! Have fun

ShepsMom

Good subject, but i think it looks somewhat soft. Your most focus is on the parent's left shoulder. Good luck with your new hobby, it gets addicting really fast. Have fun!

asawan

ShepsMom wrote:

Good subject, but i think it looks somewhat soft. Your most focus is on the parent's left shoulder. Good luck with your new hobby, it gets addicting really fast. Have fun!

I was walking while shooting, and it's the first time I do that, so I think I got nervous. With practice I hope I can get better. Any tips?

asawan

macmac wrote:

The motion in your subjects feet is good. It gives the idea of motion. The people blurred in the back ground is nice. It give some depth. I think I would like the photo a little better if the subjects were just a little further into the picture. A lower camera level would add too...I think.
Good picture! Keep shooting! Have fun

I see what you mean about a lower camera level, I wish I'd tried that! Good suggestion.