Portraits of Karri

zoomer

A girl from my office, she loves to pose and I don't mind.
Anyway....working on my lighting and getting more pop in the pics.
Constructive critiques welcome...

tmichael

I'm certainly not qualified to critique, but these are fantastic!! I hope to be able to come close to these some day!!!

Mike

Little T

Nice shots all around but a few things..

First shot looks a little too red compaired to all of the others.

Second and third ones are nice maybe tone down the hotspots alittle on the shoulders.

Fourth one she looks kinda unconfortable to me seems like her right shoulder is a little to high (but just my observation)

Cantfeelmyfingers

camera height, I feel, should be about another 6inches higher.. To give her that little bit of 'sass'. Lovely pics though! J.Cleveland

Mitchell

#1 is very nice.

The rest need a levels adjustment and a slight boost in contrast. They look drab despite the great model!

You're a lucky dog. I wish I had such a willing and beautiful model.

zoomer

Thanks Mitchell.
To my eye number 1 looks a tad to contrasty and the others look right, hey I have been wrong before......
I did a levels adjustment to them already.
I will take another look at increasing the adjustment.

It helps so much to get others opinions. After looking at these photos for so long it is easy to lose perspective.

ightenhill

like number 1 (just a touch less magenta) the rest do have a slight bleachness/haze across them but Im no expert and my monitor needs calibrating.

A small touch.. I would accentuate the eyes just a litlle with some sharpness and extra ligtness and contrast.

evoryware

Agree with Mitchell. 2, 3 & 4 contrast & also a little levels adjustment. There's a gray haze. Other than that, beautiful model and background. Take more!