In general I think they came out great! You have a very pretty daughter and did an excellent job.
A couple of comments that might be beneficial in the future:
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(1)- She looks a little slouched.
(2)- I would like to see her head turned ever so slightly more to the camera.
(3)- Amazing shot!!! Great use of post processing!
(6)- the direct sunlight is very harsh on this one and kind of washes out the image, would be a cute pose otherwise.
I really like the fourth photograph..
The first photo, I think it would appeal to me more, if her shoulders were just turned a tad towards the camera, and giver her more of a "c" tilt, kind of tipping the top of her head more towards her left shoulder. Also the last one, I do agree it seems a bit blown out. Other than those two, I really like the others!!!
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I love this set ... very beautiful photos! #4 is also my favourite ... I guess the ony thing I would change for "next time" is the red flower ... Red doesn't translate that well into b&w .... (try yellow/purple/blue?)
I'm sure she loves the photos
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A couple of comments that might be beneficial in the future:
On...
(1)- She looks a little slouched.
(2)- I would like to see her head turned ever so slightly more to the camera.
(3)- Amazing shot!!! Great use of post processing!
(6)- the direct sunlight is very harsh on this one and kind of washes out the image, would be a cute pose otherwise.
Really nice job!
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Yah the sun kept coming and going and we did this early so we wouldnt have harsh sunlight but it still happened!
Virginia
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The first photo, I think it would appeal to me more, if her shoulders were just turned a tad towards the camera, and giver her more of a "c" tilt, kind of tipping the top of her head more towards her left shoulder. Also the last one, I do agree it seems a bit blown out. Other than those two, I really like the others!!!
-Marilyn Monroe
I agree the sun is too much in the last one.
Congradulations.
Jeff
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I'm sure she loves the photos