One of my first portrait - Feedback

ifocusifocus Registered Users Posts: 161 Major grins
edited October 30, 2007 in People
I entered this picture in LPS round #15, this is really one of my first portrait and some feedback would be welcome. I really had lots of fun doing this!

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Thanks for taking the time ...

Jean-Yves

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  • photogmommaphotogmomma Registered Users Posts: 1,644 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2007
    Get out of here! One of your first portraits?!? I loved that shot!

    The colors are bright without being garish, the DOF is perfect, I love the framing, the lighting is great! Very well done!

    The skin tone looks a *tad* yellow, but nothing horrible. Watch for cropping the chin (even though it's not seen).

    But this is awesome - and a very fun shot!! clap.gif
    Andi

    www.tippiepics.com
  • MarkWMarkW Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
    edited October 30, 2007
    Wow. Excellent Shot. The color is amazing and it's very well exposed. Not bad for a first portrait at all. I wish my first portrait looked like this! :D
    Mark Warren
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  • ifocusifocus Registered Users Posts: 161 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2007
    I will keep at it.
    MarkW wrote:
    Wow. Excellent Shot. The color is amazing and it's very well exposed. Not bad for a first portrait at all. I wish my first portrait looked like this! :D

    Thanks for the feedback, it looks like I am on the right track. I have been shooting landscape and artifacts all this time. I just bought a flash and some homemade stuff. Strobist.com has exellent ideas to get started. See you around.
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