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What do you think

trippy64trippy64 Registered Users Posts: 55 Big grins
edited March 9, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
I actually had these for the challenge 31, but made them a week late. I can re-shoot so I hit the challnge date, but would like to know if they fit for this challenge before I do?? Comments on technical, composition and/or does it capture the theme? Or maybe, I don't like this because.....


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Thanking you in advance.
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    AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited March 8, 2005
    hmmmm, I can't tell if they would pass. Is it fair to ask Andy?
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    BertBert Registered Users Posts: 18 Big grins
    edited March 8, 2005
    I would eliminate five of the candles. Just one with that background would work. I like the bottom right candle but would put in somewhere close to the top left position.
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    aero-nutaero-nut Registered Users Posts: 693 Major grins
    edited March 8, 2005
    Bert wrote:
    I would eliminate five of the candles. Just one with that background would work. I like the bottom right candle but would put in somewhere close to the top left position.
    Yeah, I agree. I think it's a little busy with multiple candles. Maybe even just part of one candle would be better....
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    Charlie BrownCharlie Brown Registered Users Posts: 199 Major grins
    edited March 8, 2005
    of the two i like the second shot. i like the color of the candles in that onw as opposed to the rather bland creme color in the first. that being said id love to see a single candle, the color of the ones in the second shot, with the tip of the candle and flame reaching into the lower far right of the picture.


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    snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited March 8, 2005
    Yep, I agree. Keep it to one object. I like the brighter color too.
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    ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited March 9, 2005
    Yup, Snappy said it again.

    ginger
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