Shume boy, Tanzania

NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
edited November 24, 2007 in People
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"Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

http://www.behance.net/brosepix

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  • OwenOwen Registered Users Posts: 948 Major grins
    edited November 24, 2007
    Beautiful portrait! clap.gif

    It is a bit underexposed and a bit low contrast, but that is nothing photoshop can't fix!

    Also, I would consider cropping off a bit of the top of his head to bring the focus down to his eyes and away from the wooden structure at the top.

    Lets see more of your work!
  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited November 24, 2007
    Owen wrote:
    Beautiful portrait! clap.gif

    It is a bit underexposed and a bit low contrast, but that is nothing photoshop can't fix!

    Also, I would consider cropping off a bit of the top of his head to bring the focus down to his eyes and away from the wooden structure at the top.

    Lets see more of your work!

    Appreciate your comments! Yes, I agree it's a little flat. It was shot in very strong sunlight, that's maybe the main factor.
    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
  • susanbudgesusanbudge Registered Users Posts: 44 Big grins
    edited November 24, 2007
    A wonderful portrait, I really like the boys expression and the feeling you could almost touch him.
    I agree about the crop, but I don't think it is underexposed, rather it is just the sun causing those shadows which are easily lifted in photoshop. I don't think that the hair and forehead can't take any more exposure without being blown out.
    A lovely portrait, anymore?
    Susan
  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited November 24, 2007
    Owen wrote:
    Beautiful portrait! clap.gif

    It is a bit underexposed and a bit low contrast, but that is nothing photoshop can't fix!

    Also, I would consider cropping off a bit of the top of his head to bring the focus down to his eyes and away from the wooden structure at the top.

    Lets see more of your work!

    Trying your suggestions



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    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
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