Confusion, Confusion, Input Please
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Choices, Choices...
We are in a battle at my house....Everyone has a Different Opinion of what I should enter in the LPS round....
Help fellow Digrinners!
Current Entry..."Quiet Bliss" (I liked this one, cuz it was soft and I felt it had a "victorian" look")
"After 5"
"Serenity"?? (Almost the same as first one, slightly different angle, and slight change of lighting)
We are in a battle at my house....Everyone has a Different Opinion of what I should enter in the LPS round....
Help fellow Digrinners!
Current Entry..."Quiet Bliss" (I liked this one, cuz it was soft and I felt it had a "victorian" look")
"After 5"
"Serenity"?? (Almost the same as first one, slightly different angle, and slight change of lighting)
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One day, I started writing, not knowing that I had chained myself for life to a noble but merciless master. When God hands you a gift, he also hands you a whip; and the whip is intended solely for self-flagellation...I'm here alone in my dark madness, all by myself with my deck of cards --- and, of course, the whip God gave me." Truman Capote
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The only thing that completely distracts me is the out of focus....they aren't sharp at all and are difficult to look at. The ambient light would really come across if the images weren't so soft...almost like camera shake. I do think you're on to something theme wise....I'd go with #1.
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The soft looks fits very nicely with the subject but the dark pillow(?) distracts me in both #1 and #3 - especially in #3.
I would be tempted to try a square crop on #2, croppiing just below the second candle from the left to show some of the bubbles. Or maybe a vertical - cutting out most of the shower curtin and the fishie on the wall but leaving her enough room in the frame.
Good luck!
Virginia
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I like both #1 and #2. And, I know that doesn't help.
For the purposes of this contest you may want to consider #2 because the soft focus you used in #1 may be misconstrued as out of focus by a judge and it may hurt your chances. What's kind of cool about #2 is the way your model is surrounded by the candle lights and their reflections. It really draws the eye toward her.
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The softness doesn't bother me so much, but the judges might not dig it... I have no idea what I am talking about, don't even know who the judges will be?!?!? I don't think I have a clue as to what this theme is all about... Is it a no theme or is the theme really ambient or flash?
Sorry about the rant on your post...
Winston
I don't know, I don't help as the aim is for the judges and who knows what will be or what they like!
Other than that, I really love these images
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and I do believe its true.. that there are roads left in both of our shoes..
Soooo
Even though I loved the feel of #1, I went with number 2 "After 5" which has a mixture of soft and hard, and I incorporated some changes from all the suggestions...I wanted to keep the photo as "virgin" as I could, hopefully basic editing is still considered "virgin"... (got to first and second base, but never a home run ..ha ha hows that for analogy on my part...(ok I'll stop))...
As a woman, and a mom, I related to #2...a relaxing bubble bath is a luxury for a lot of us females, and it would definently have to be "After 5" ...
As I said...THANK YOU for your time, comments, and CC, it was appreciated!!
Good Luck with this Round.
Donna
Lovely capture.
I see that that you've entered After 5, and I think you picked the right one.
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