Rustic, Barn, School, BW Conversion

NachoNacho Registered Users Posts: 212 Major grins
edited November 25, 2007 in Landscapes
Hi Folks:

(Two) different rustic scenes of abandoned buildings. I think the last one is a too gray, not enough contrast. Your thoughts would be greatly appreciated. All taken with the Nikon 18-70mm, AF-S, f/3.5-4.5.

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Nikon D40, ISO 200, f/7.1, 1/4, 29mm

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Nikon D40, ISO 200, 7.1, 1/13, 38mm

gassho,

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Comments

  • DogdotsDogdots Registered Users Posts: 8,795 Major grins
    edited November 25, 2007
    Nice photos.

    I do agree with you on the second photo. Also the crop seems tight on the top. If you can give the roof some space that would be good.

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  • Marc MuenchMarc Muench Registered Users Posts: 1,420 Major grins
    edited November 25, 2007
    I agree that the second one is flat, but it holds the interesting subject. The first image has been processed better but holds no interest or subject.
    I like this location and hope you work out the kinksthumb.gif
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  • NachoNacho Registered Users Posts: 212 Major grins
    edited November 25, 2007
    Thanks a bunch Marc, truly appreciate the comments. Yes, the shed is far more intriguing. I like the first one, something to do wih all those lines going here and there, but there is little sense of subject on that one. Thanks again, I'll keep looking deeply!

    gassho,

    N
    Exposure Latitude(s).com
    "The temple bell stops but the sound keeps coming out of the flowers." -- Basho
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