LPS#17 Does this "fit" the theme?

tlee

I can see the theme--but is it obvious enough to you guys--or am I stretching it? Any C&C are welcome.

Pink Bubblegum

VisualXpressions

I think it fits the theme Tlee... and I think you captured some great expressions with your model! I just don't like the trip tic shots very much... although I think there will be a few in this round... If you can blend the last shot background with the other 2 it would be less of a distraction...

Cheers
Winston

tlee

VisualXpressions wrote:

I think it fits the theme Tlee... and I think you captured some great expressions with your model! I just don't like the trip tic shots very much... although I think there will be a few in this round... If you can blend the last shot background with the other 2 it would be less of a distraction...

Cheers
Winston

Thank you for your reply. It is nice to have one, after 40+ views. I was thinking that I maight have to "fix" the backgrounds so they would blend better. Thanks again!

jziegler

I pretty much agree with Winston on this one. You got the theme I also don't really care for typtichs. You got some really great expressions there!

tlee

jziegler wrote:

I pretty much agree with Winston on this one. You got the theme I also don't really care for typtichs. You got some really great expressions there!

I'm kind of 50/50 when it comes to tryptichs. But, in this case, I think it's needed. Thanks for taking the time to reply--I appreciate it!

tlee

Made some changes.... I am second guessing the tryptich idea--would going with just one of the images still convey the theme (I'm thinking the second one)?

VisualXpressions

I like the changes... The tryptich is growing on me... if you do decide on a single shot the middle one is best...

Winston

eoren1

Very clever idea! I like the single (middle) shot best of the three and think it could stand alone for the LPS. Her hair is lost with that background though. I think changing the background would help and/or a tighter crop to bring out the eyes and gum bubble.
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tlee

Thanks for the input. I've got a decision to make--tryptich, or single image?

pyroPrints.com

tryptich for me

tlee

pyroPrints.com wrote:

tryptich for me

I've changed the "official" entry to the single image--but there's still time to change my mind!

Frog Lady

I saw the photo you have currently entered and laughed out loud - thinking how perfectly it fit the theme. I really like the details of the shot - the overall pink theme, her crossed eyes, the hat/bow, great expression.

I vote for the single image

C.

tlee

Frog Lady wrote:

I saw the photo you have currently entered and laughed out loud - thinking how perfectly it fit the theme. I really like the details of the shot - the overall pink theme, her crossed eyes, the hat/bow, great expression.

I vote for the single image

C.

Thanks.