Jane Halsey
This is a photo of my Step Mother's great Aunt Jane taken on Jane's 93rd birthday. The photo was taken on
My guess is pulling this off here is as good as the quality gets. If anyone could try and help me improve it, I would appreciate it.
I debated putting this thread in people, technique, or finishing. If it needs to be moved, thank you.
Thanks to all,
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My guess is pulling this off here is as good as the quality gets. If anyone could try and help me improve it, I would appreciate it.
I debated putting this thread in people, technique, or finishing. If it needs to be moved, thank you.
Thanks to all,
Z
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What would you like to see done to this to make it better?
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I dont know much about the expression!
I guess if we could just generally clean the image, make the overexposed/missing areas a little more consistant, and just generally darken the blacks, that would be great.
I obviously think that the character of an older print needs to be maintained. When this type print was new, how would it have looked?
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i wil take a stab at this.
First, I'd ask about the scanning. if you didn't scan at high resolution--600 or more, I would start over with that.
Auto levels will remove the color cast and bring out the contrast a bit.
In my opionion, though, this does too much. I like it looking like an old photo.
If you make a copy and do this in a separate layer, you can change the opacity of the top layer to blend the two. This is 50% opacity in the top (auto leveled) layer
In this next one I did three more things
1. made another layer in between the first two and manually leveled it, pulling in both sides a bit.
2. apply the noise/ median filter. That gets rid of a few of the spots. It would be cleaner to go in and manually clone them out, but a LOT more time consuming
3. I also cropped it. it seems to bottom ads to the pic if it were all there.
I am not sure it is actualy all that much better. I feel like I am working on a precious antique. something to be said for leaving well enough alone.
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Incidentally, this is one of about 2000 rare photography books recently donated to the NH Institute of Art -- wow!
It's great that your family has that old photo, and they know who it is!
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I like the minimal cleanup approach for this image. I'd leave it as close to the original as possible, even leave most of the yellow cast. Making it a pure B&W takes a lot out of the aged heirloom quality. I'd clean spots and boost contrast a bit, but leave it mostly alone. Seems to me it would be a great 8x10 (with appropriate frame) on a family wall.
I'm not a photoshop wiz, so here's my take on it.
I too love the old feel, so I cleaned up a couple blemishes, scratches and spots the showed up. I set a black point to bring some contrast and then lowered opacity to bring some of the color and brightness back. I added a hue/saturation level and brought back some color, upped the saturation a touch and lowered the brightness. I added a touch of contrast too.
Edit - I decided I could try something to bring some more contrast to her face and get rid of the almost blown area of her face/neck/hands. So I did another curves layer and set a black point on her left eye, lowered opacity and masked almost everything else.
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I thought I would share my best attempt as well.
My step mother is thrilled with everyone's changes.
Z
PS: I have to go back and clean off some of the dust spots on the bottom. It s a time consuming task!
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