I love the first shot
Agree that 2nd can use just a bit of contrast.
Third, not so much, i can't point what exactly it is, i think it has something to do with 3 people on the picture have completely different lighting. It looks like they don't belong on the same shot.
Lady's face looks very dark and plasticky compare to the baby and a man in the same shot.
3rd the background is half dark half light, so it makes it feel a bit cornered. Looks like baby might have moved a bit as there is a little fuzz (so maybe faster shutter next time). Thanks for sharing!
Judging it based solely on the expression of the child - number one is the winner. The baby has kind of a detached expression in the other two. There is also a bit too much of the "misty lighting" effect on the male subject in number three.
I might also suggest some shots taken in the landscape orientation with the subjects maybe a bit more off center in the frame.
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Number 2 is also very nice, though the contrast could use a boost for my taste.
Don't care for number 3, mostly because of Dad's grooming. . . . Which has nothing to do with your photography. Perhaps a shave and a ponytail?
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Agree that 2nd can use just a bit of contrast.
Third, not so much, i can't point what exactly it is, i think it has something to do with 3 people on the picture have completely different lighting. It looks like they don't belong on the same shot.
Lady's face looks very dark and plasticky compare to the baby and a man in the same shot.
Overall, nice portraits.
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3rd the background is half dark half light, so it makes it feel a bit cornered. Looks like baby might have moved a bit as there is a little fuzz (so maybe faster shutter next time). Thanks for sharing!
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I might also suggest some shots taken in the landscape orientation with the subjects maybe a bit more off center in the frame.