Will you take me home?

tsk1979

Hi ppl, after a long hitatus, I am back in the game!
Hope to have your feedback on my entry

Tentacion

Hi Welcome Back....

I find that the dog is too centered and appears more that way cuz the subject has so much space around him....I was also wondering how the b/g would look in all one color and not splotchy...like a low key white?

The title of the photo is "Will U take me Home" but he has a leash so he gives the impression of belonging to someone..I would clone out the leash.

I might suggest if you have time to try a reshoot.

Have a Great New Year

Awais Yaqub

Blak & white ?

tsk1979

Hmm, can't reshoot, but I can up the contrast and get rid of the leash completely.
Maybe do a tighter crop?

Shudderz

tsk1979 wrote:

Hmm, can't reshoot, but I can up the contrast and get rid of the leash completely.
Maybe do a tighter crop?

I think that would help get rid of some of the distraction in the background, whether the leash, or blown highlights and would focus more on the dog's eyes, which are really what should be focused on.

tsk1979

Tighter crops and BW and another image from the set
I did a tighter crop.
Which one do you think is better B&W or the Color?






Then another title I am looking at is
"Please set me free"

pyroPrints.com

tsk1979 wrote:

Then another title I am looking at is
"Please set me free"

This last one is good, content wise. Not sure about the title, and the B&W conversion I think could be done better. It's a little too light IMO (but what do i know )

tsk1979

The final version!