minimalism? 3rd time lucky?

rahmonster

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles

Gem

Fronds

fenced

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.

Photosbychuck

rahmonster wrote:

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles

Gem

Fronds

fenced

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.

Hi, rahmonster
I like the Fronds & the fenced photos.

Good Luck with the contest.

Take Care,
Chuck,

Angelo

Photosbychuck wrote:

Hi, rahmonster
I like the Fronds & the fenced photos.

Good Luck with the contest.

Take Care,
Chuck,

Ditto!

rahmonster

I edited the fronds, it now looks like this...

Which I think I like better this way, let me know what you think.

landrum

My favorite is "Gem". I like it's simplicity and color. "Fenced" I think I'd like better if the fence tie wasn't showing in the upper right.

shaman

Gem... very minmal... sparse... empty...

shaman

Salt

I like the fronds shot. I'd like to see it on a clear day though - I'm just thinking that a clear blue sky would be more minimalist.

Oh, and also, just one set of fronds. The second set behind the first adds too much to me. Just the simple lines of one frond, with a clear blue sky....

gpgold

rahmonster wrote:

Ok, so this is my third try, thankyou for all the crutique I'm learning alot doing this challenge....Using this as my guide:

minimalism: 1: A school of abstract art that emphasises extreme simplification of form, by using basic shapes primary colours etc.
2:Use of the fewest or barest essentials.

I came up with these...Just look for opinions and critique.

thanks everyone.

stove handles

Gem

Fronds

fenced

Hope they worked....I'm still figuring this all out.

I like the gem also - it has great simplicity.

regards,

Gary

joechiu

I like the fronds - but I agree that it would be better without the 2nd one...
The fronds remind me of Venetian blinds. I imagined a window frame around it...

The gem picture looks too noisy and OOF to me...

rahmonster

I agree about the fronds, but I wont be able to reshoot for a few days as a big bank of lovely autumn weather has just blown in and its wet wet wet!

I am working on a cleaner version of the Gem.

Thanks for the comments.