Winter Afternoon

gavingavin Registered Users Posts: 411 Major grins
edited January 8, 2008 in People
any comments would be great.

brianndg8.jpg
D700 and some glass

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  • bauermanbauerman Registered Users Posts: 452 Major grins
    edited January 7, 2008
    In a situation like this one where there is going to be nothing to view in the background - I might have zoomed in and filled the frame with just the subjects face. Or, if you want to stay wide angle - move the subject to somewhere other than dead center in the frame - that can make for a more interesting photograph.
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  • CantfeelmyfingersCantfeelmyfingers Registered Users Posts: 531 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2008
    I do like the contrast of the black and white...
    I also agree on filling the frame a bit more.
    Her face seems a little too dark.

    I really like the concept, just a few nit picks is all.
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  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited January 8, 2008
    A little fill light would have helped a lot. Zooming in on her would also be a plus. It's also just a bit centered.
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