The theme was "surface" C&C is very usefull.

Arvan

Im going to apply a photagraphy school so this is 2 pics i might send in. The theme is surface so this is what i came out with so far.

First one is a rainy window. Shot with my nos sold Pentax 50mm f/1.4 @ 1.4.

second one is actually me ..uberphotoshopped ofc. The wierd lookin texture in my eye is actually from a washingmashine i shot months ago..








C&C plz

Skippy

Arvan wrote:

Im going to apply a photagraphy school so this is 2 pics i might send in. The theme is surface so this is what i came out with so far.

First one is a rainy window. Shot with my nos sold Pentax 50mm f/1.4 @ 1.4.

second one is actually me ..uberphotoshopped ofc. The wierd lookin texture in my eye is actually from a washingmashine i shot months ago..
C&C plz

All the best for the application into the Photography School Arvan

That second shot with you in it is creepy, like a shot from a Thriller
The eyes look great ... well done! .... Skippy
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Arvan

Skippy wrote:

All the best for the application into the Photography School Arvan

That second shot with you in it is creepy, like a shot from a Thriller
The eyes look great ... well done! .... Skippy
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Thanx skippy, you allways take your time .

Any changes that you think i might do?. Want it to be perfect

Chrissiebeez_NL

like em both but not so fond about the name in the first one. its to photoshoppy and IMO takes away from the strenght of the simplicity.

in the second photo, maybe you could make the vissible areas a bit less round. it is a strong image for sure and the 'looking through a hole' thing certainly adds but its also a bit limiting in not having your eyes explore the rest of the image.

just my view.

good luck and hope you make it in!

Arvan

Hmm that´s good critique..Il do a reprocess of it tonight. will try some trix i have in my bag