What about one of these for LPS #20????

Cuties02q

What do you think of one of these? Color or B&W? Thanks

cbsnet

Cuties02q wrote:

What do you think of one of these? Color or B&W? Thanks

Took a look at your site, and saw a lot of good stuff. While good, this photo just doesn't jump out and grab me.

-carl

kwalsh

I think I like the B&W better, the hand comes out better. If possible I might reshoot with a slightly different composition, have her hold her hand more to the left (her right) to separate it a little more from her face and not block the word "peace" on her shirt. I think if you can get the hand flashing "peace", the word "peace" and the smile on her face all together and not overlapping on top of each other you'll have a stronger composition than the current one and connect the concept with the viewer better. I think the depth of field with the shirt and face slightly out of focus and the hand sharp is good as is.

Good luck!

Ken

Cuties02q

I think if you can get the hand flashing "peace", the word "peace" and the smile on her face all together and not overlapping on top of each other you'll have a stronger composition than the current one and connect the concept with the viewer better.

Yes I agree that was my goal...maybe she will let me try again Thanks!!!

shatch

kwalsh wrote:

I think I like the B&W better, the hand comes out better. If possible I might reshoot with a slightly different composition, have her hold her hand more to the left (her right) to separate it a little more from her face and not block the word "peace" on her shirt. I think if you can get the hand flashing "peace", the word "peace" and the smile on her face all together and not overlapping on top of each other you'll have a stronger composition than the current one and connect the concept with the viewer better. I think the depth of field with the shirt and face slightly out of focus and the hand sharp is good as is.

Good luck!

Ken

Cute concept and great model.