LPS 20 ideas..

JetJet Registered Users Posts: 233 Major grins
edited January 20, 2008 in The Dgrin Challenges
Gday, just looking for some feedback on some ideas I worked on, I'm not 'over the moon' about any of them, but some other opinions would be nice. I'm not sure if I'll be able to shoot again before the comp ends. Which one do you like? Are any possible contenders?

1. Colour
seatcolour.jpg

2. BW
seatbw.jpg

hands.jpg

tebcopy.jpg

Oh also, any title suggestions?
Thanks
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What do you think? 15 votes

1. seat colour
66% 10 votes
2. seat bw
13% 2 votes
3. Holding Hands
13% 2 votes
4. Flower
0% 0 votes
Keep shooting
6% 1 vote

Comments

  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    The first one is my favorite, but personally I would consider cropping it to more of a pano, cutting of the top half or so to about the bottom horizontal back board (using it as a framing element).

    Best of luck to you!
    Emily
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    Greensquared wrote:
    The first one is my favorite, but personally I would consider cropping it to more of a pano, cutting of the top half or so to about the bottom horizontal back board (using it as a framing element).

    Best of luck to you!
    Emily
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  • PaulThomasMcKeePaulThomasMcKee Registered Users Posts: 429 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Greensquared
    The first one is my favorite, but personally I would consider cropping it to more of a pano, cutting of the top half or so to about the bottom horizontal back board (using it as a framing element).

    Best of luck to you!
    Emily

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    15524779-Ti.gif - (Good Eye Emily!) Nice shot Jet!
  • HoofClixHoofClix Registered Users Posts: 1,156 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    Touching and unique idea, #1. I agree with Emily!
    Mark
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  • photogmommaphotogmomma Registered Users Posts: 1,644 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    PaulThomasMcKee wrote:


    15524779-Ti.gif - (Good Eye Emily!) Nice shot Jet!

    I read that as "Good bye, Emily." Laughing.gif!

    I agree with the others, though!
    Andi

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  • urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    photogmomma wrote:
    I read that as "Good bye, Emily." Laughing.gif!

    I agree with the others, though!

    Like the cropping suggestion, and you guys might think i'm crazy for piggybacking but I think "Goodbye Emily" is a great title, to boot. Seriously! A faceless image like this needs a story. thumb.gif
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  • binghottbinghott Registered Users Posts: 1,075 Major grins
    edited January 18, 2008
    i really like the first shot a lot, but the watch is a little distracting to me
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  • JetJet Registered Users Posts: 233 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2008
    Thanks for all the advice! It sounds like everyone is agreed.. so here is the new version - I also cloned out the watch, as I found it a bit distracting.. is it too noticeable? Any more input?

    pano2.jpg
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  • LlywellynLlywellyn Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 3,186 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2008
    The new cropped version is fantastic! clap.gif There's a sliver of white on the far left, starting in the bottom corner, that should be cropped out. I didn't notice it at first in the original, but the cropped version really brings focus to that blank little area.

    Very nice entry. thumb.gif
  • HoofClixHoofClix Registered Users Posts: 1,156 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2008
    Sliver of white already noted that you could crop out further. Had you cloned out the watch before the original post, I wouldn't have noticed, so I suppose it's a "clean clone."
    Mark
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    and I do believe its true.. that there are roads left in both of our shoes..
  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2008
    Looks great! Good job on the clone too. Personally I would crop a bit more off the top as I find the light/color in th top left corner distracting.
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

  • ivarivar Registered Users Posts: 8,395 Major grins
    edited January 20, 2008
    I like that new crop thumb.gif Much nicer than the one you posted originally, imo.
    Ivar
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