The white mouse.

ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
edited February 8, 2008 in Other Cool Shots
Took some random snaps of the schools new imac..

Did a rough PP on it, wich i like.. =)


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C&C // Arvid
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  • SkippySkippy Registered Users Posts: 12,075 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    Arvan wrote:
    Took some random snaps of the schools new imac..

    Did a rough PP on it, wich i like.. =)
    C&C // Arvid


    Oooooooow love the curves on this shot Arvid clap.gif
    Well Done, this is a really nice shot thumb.gif ... Skippy :D
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  • ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    thanx skippy...I think it´s a keeper :)
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  • anwmn1anwmn1 Registered Users Posts: 3,469 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    I like this quite a bit too. The only negative I see is the top left corner area where the cord looks smudged and really noisy in the top left.

    I think if you can reshoot and get a sharper effect in that area it would be excellent!

    Nice simplistic shot though! thumb.gif
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  • ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    The noise and so is ment to be...I even added some.

    Getting bored of all these perfect photos. Sometimes you just don´t see the creativity going on, just if it´s sharp and noisefree...

    Do you get my point and what im trying to do here?:)
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  • ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    The noise and so is ment to be...I even added some.

    Getting bored of all these perfect photos. Sometimes you just don´t see the creativity going on, just if it´s sharp and noisefree...

    Do you get my point and what im trying to do here?:)
    www.agustavsson.smugmug.com
  • ZeeZee Registered Users Posts: 98 Big grins
    edited February 6, 2008
    Wow! That's some nice work thumb.gif

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  • ArvanArvan Registered Users Posts: 888 Major grins
    edited February 8, 2008
    Zee wrote:
    Wow! That's some nice work thumb.gif

    Thanx =)
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  • anwmn1anwmn1 Registered Users Posts: 3,469 Major grins
    edited February 8, 2008
    Arvan wrote:
    The noise and so is ment to be...I even added some.

    Getting bored of all these perfect photos. Sometimes you just don´t see the creativity going on, just if it´s sharp and noisefree...

    Do you get my point and what im trying to do here?:)

    Think you misinterpreted my comment. I know what you were trying to do here - just pointing out what I feel you could have done better. deal.gif

    I like the noise and everything about the image- except for the top left corner. rolleyes1.gif

    The first smudge along the cord is a big issue. Doesn't make any logical sense why that would be there- obvious PP- and really ruins the excellent shadow you have going along the cord.

    In the top corner the cord becomes fat and flat and the dark gray in the corner - again - obvious PP -nothing to cast a shadow at the angle of the light- and draws to much attention away from the subject.

    Noise is great- breaking the rules is great- lots of photoshop can be great- but in this case I feel the areas I pointed out detract from what I feel could be a great image!

    Just one artists view- ne_nau.gif
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