Are you using a dslr or point and shoot? The background shows a lot of pixelation. Also, it seem like it's focused in on the back die leaving the front very soft. You may want to lower the aperture size.
I would play with the exposure and\or the shadows and contrast. You either need to make the dice shadows more pronounced or eliminate them altogether and create a black void.
You have the idea and a start towards something very good. Keep going.
I also like the idea and have about the same comments as others. Ill list what i think
1. The dice being centered actually makes the shot less appealing to me.
2. The picture seems larger than it needs to be. possibly shrinking the shot will help with the compression artifacts being so noticable?
3. I think a border could do some good for this shot
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I would play with the exposure and\or the shadows and contrast. You either need to make the dice shadows more pronounced or eliminate them altogether and create a black void.
You have the idea and a start towards something very good. Keep going.
1. The dice being centered actually makes the shot less appealing to me.
2. The picture seems larger than it needs to be. possibly shrinking the shot will help with the compression artifacts being so noticable?
3. I think a border could do some good for this shot
Keep it up!
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