air and water

hschlessphoto

4 here...PLEASE critique! thanks for looking.









enjoy!

nedlA kraM

They are all very well composed and executed shots although I feel the last one needs a bit more "pop", it kind of left me wanting more from it
over all very good work

nedlA kraM

ps you might want to tone down your logo its a bit distracting lol

anwmn1

1- Composition could be better- the rock in the foreground is cut off- would like to see more of the rock and less of the high water remnents on the shrubbery. Color is good, water flow is just right, and light is good- just to many distractions.

2- Like this one quite a bit except for one thing- the brown rock in the left third - top of frame- my eye keeps going there. This is a very calming photo and would work well with a good quote.

3- Nice simple, great flare, good comp. Sun is centered from top to bottom- maybe crop so flare goes into the corner- just shy or just past?

4- No wow factor but is still a nice shot.

Overall though this is a good series- just a little more work or thinks to look at next time- and they can be great.

Vrungel

I like number 3 the best, although as people noticed vertically centered horizon does steal something from the photo. Good job overall!