Party in studio

PartynenPartynen Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
edited February 11, 2008 in People
Last saturday in studio with few frends...
This is what I found from memorycard on sunday:

laura_01.jpg_medium.jpg


C&C welcome!

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  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited February 11, 2008
    Mmmm.... intriguing shot with some wonderful bits, but difficult to exploit, maybe, I think. I'd like to see the eyes better, more detail in the darker areas of the hair, and the shadow in the middle of the forehead reduced. Perhaps crop so the hair L is just going off frame, de-emphasise the shirt and arms, and lighten the background below the face. Thanks and good luck!
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  • gubbsgubbs Registered Users Posts: 3,166 Major grins
    edited February 11, 2008
    Very dramatic but her eyes are in too much shadow for me... its not very complimentary (sp???) and makes her look a little scary :D
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  • PartynenPartynen Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
    edited February 11, 2008
    Here's another pic from same session:
    emmi_13.jpg_medium.jpg
  • pyrypyry Registered Users Posts: 1,733 Major grins
    edited February 11, 2008
    Partynen wrote:
    Last saturday in studio with few frends...
    This is what I found from memorycard on sunday:

    C&C welcome!


    Strip light, cool. The back light makes her hair look like it's standing up on end, but it doesn't come close to ruining the shot. Nice work!
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  • PartynenPartynen Registered Users Posts: 8 Beginner grinner
    edited February 11, 2008
    Let's continue with the same session...
    Hmmm.. wonder why I didn't post all these at the same time..

    saana_04_holly.jpg_medium.jpg

    saana_07_holly.jpg_medium.jpg
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