Santa Monica Pier

LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
edited March 24, 2005 in Landscapes
Well, brutal honesty time again. Got to get better somehow.

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Steven
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  • ShakeyShakey Registered Users Posts: 1,004 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    Better than anything I have done!thumb.gif I like the reflections .
    It is very good IMO.

    Tim
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    It's a good shot the reflection really makes it thumb.gif
    Which the sky was more dramatic, but hey that's up to Doppler7000 :D
  • gpgoldgpgold Registered Users Posts: 469 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    LiquidOps wrote:
    Well, brutal honesty time again. Got to get better somehow.
    Steven
    I agree it is a nice capture. The reflection takes it to a higher level.

    regards,

    Gary
  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    Thank you all for your comments. I really want to get as much feedback on my images as possible.

    Thanks again, and keep the comments coming!!!

    Steven
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  • HarrybHarryb Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 22,708 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    LiquidOps wrote:
    Well, brutal honesty time again. Got to get better somehow.

    Steven
    Hiya Steven,

    I looked at really hard trying to find something wrong with it and I couldn't find anything to complain about except for the absence of egrets. :D Outstanding shotylsuper.gif
    Harry
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  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    Harryb wrote:
    Hiya Steven,

    I looked at really hard trying to find something wrong with it and I couldn't find anything to complain about except for the absence of egrets. :D Outstanding shotylsuper.gif
    Thank you Harry.

    This means there's still hope for me and my 717 :)

    w00000t

    Steven
    Wandering Through Life Photography
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  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    I'm proud of this one, so i'm bumping it back to the top :)

    hehe

    don't shoot!!!

    Steven
    Wandering Through Life Photography
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  • Phil U.Phil U. Registered Users Posts: 1,330 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    LiquidOps wrote:
    Well, brutal honesty time again. Got to get better somehow.



    Steven
    Brutally honest eh - well, here goes... I'm a sucker for pictures including elements of ocean/beach/maritime stuff. I'm a sucker for sunrises/sunsets. In short - I like it. For me the mood is great. I really like the reflection. Like bfjr said, I'd like to see a nicer sky, but what the heck.
  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 22, 2005
    Phil U. wrote:
    Brutally honest eh - well, here goes... I'm a sucker for pictures including elements of ocean/beach/maritime stuff. I'm a sucker for sunrises/sunsets. In short - I like it. For me the mood is great. I really like the reflection. Like bfjr said, I'd like to see a nicer sky, but what the heck.
    Thanks for the comments Phil

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  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    OK, Steven, I will bump it back up to the top, too. rolleyes1.gif Little trick we are all learning huh?

    That is a good photo, I suppose could be great with a better sky. On the other hand, a better sky might detract from the reflections.

    I really like it.

    So, I looked at it. Told you the truth, a really good photo, so good that for bumping it back up, would you please tell me if the color intensity was in the image immediately or if you did anything to help it a bit, if so what? One thing, it is so sharp, is that just a smart use of a tripod. It just looks better and sharper than most reflections I have seen. Even the building and lights do. Anything I can learn from this?

    ginger (Tell Harry to send you an egret, you can paste him into anything.)
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    The bump didn't work, I will try this one. I looked at the shot again, the clarity, focus and all are amazing. And the brightness. Still looking to learn, myself.

    Could you say what you did in post?

    gingerthumb.gif
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    Like everyone else, I really like the reflections. A couple of things occurred to, looking at yer shot. Pan down a wee bit, put the pier more firmly in the upper third, which will give you more reflection and balance the shot a bit better. Also, the pier is dull, it needs better light on it. But if there was a way to make the shine a bigger part of the shot, you might be able to get away with a slightly dull pier. ne_nau.gif
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  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    wxwax wrote:
    Like everyone else, I really like the reflections. A couple of things occurred to, looking at yer shot. Pan down a wee bit, put the pier more firmly in the upper third, which will give you more reflection and balance the shot a bit better. Also, the pier is dull, it needs better light on it. But if there was a way to make the shine a bigger part of the shot, you might be able to get away with a slightly dull pier. ne_nau.gif
    Thanks for all the feedback guys. I didn't really do to much inpost. Did some minor color adjustments and levels just a tad, but that's it. I tried something (not srue if it did any good) but i stacked two layers on top of eachother, hoping to rid some of the noise. Again... not sure if that did any good, but it made me happy :)

    This was not on a tri-pod... this was handheld.

    So yeah... thanks again for looking... I'm still learning here :)

    not too shabby for a non DSLR eh?

    Steven
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  • USAIRUSAIR Registered Users Posts: 2,646 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    Steven
    LiquidOps wrote:
    Well, brutal honesty time again. Got to get better somehow.

    DSC00574_800.jpg

    Steven
    Great shot nice colorsclap.gifclap.gifclap.gif

    Thanks
    Fred
  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 23, 2005
    Thanks Fred :)
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  • MuskyDudeMuskyDude Registered Users Posts: 1,508 Major grins
    edited March 24, 2005
    To be brutally honest there isn't a thing I would change, lovely shot! Just love those reflections!


    AJ
  • LiquidOpsLiquidOps Registered Users Posts: 835 Major grins
    edited March 24, 2005
    MuskyDude wrote:
    To be brutally honest there isn't a thing I would change, lovely shot! Just love those reflections!


    AJ
    Thank you MuskyDude.

    Glad you enjoyed :)
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