Which one?

will-jum

Go these in the morning frost, though i don't know which is best. Please place a vote and say why you chose it, many thanks!!

#1


#2


#3


C&C is also welcome (y)

anwmn1

I think all of these have great potential but are all too centrally composed and focused. Move your selective focus to one side or the other and have the barb in focus at the front or in the back to create more depth.

These are just okay and of these I prefer the last because of the sweet background.

eoren1

That last one is very well done.
The upper left corner detracts from the smooth gradient though.
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TallyHo

number 3 is great but as mentioned above, maybe try and clone out the upper left hand side.

will-jum

eoren1 wrote:

That last one is very well done.
The upper left corner detracts from the smooth gradient though.
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Yeh i agree, gonna clone it out now, will post the result soon!

Thanks for all your comments guys!

will-jum

Here it is (i also changed the levels to make the whole thing less 'dull')


So watcha think?

Elaine

I think your revised version is the winner!

TallyHo

Yep, love the revised version, its a keeper

Not sure its my failing monitor but it looks theres a slight circular "blob" on the far left just above the wire. to my eye it looks like a clone stamp which hasnt quite merged with the surrounding area.

will-jum

TallyHo wrote:

Yep, love the revised version, its a keeper

Not sure its my failing monitor but it looks theres a slight circular "blob" on the far left just above the wire. to my eye it looks like a clone stamp which hasnt quite merged with the surrounding area.

Yeh i see a little something, but i'm done with it for tonight!

Thanks for the comments guys!

ulrikft

I like number two, the background is very soothing in that one.. Reminds me of an old swedish photographer/photoshopper (Beck, satansrike.com guy if any knew/know him). The redish/darkish corner over into a lighter grey are really gives it a desolate and cold look. I love it!

(guess I'm the odd one out :P )

will-jum

ulrikft wrote:

I like number two, the background is very soothing in that one.. Reminds me of an old swedish photographer/photoshopper (Beck, satansrike.com guy if any knew/know him). The redish/darkish corner over into a lighter grey are really gives it a desolate and cold look. I love it!

(guess I'm the odd one out :P )

Thanks man, yeh i also quite like the background of that one and your not at all the odd one out, two others think #2> #3 !

Telf22

2! I love where its focused.

will-jum

Bigger images are here:

http://will-jum.deviantart.com/art/Frozen-78035411

http://will-jum.deviantart.com/art/Wire-78035643

Thanks for looking!

Awais Yaqub

Great last one is amazing here is 2 of my 1 2

will-jum

Awais Yaqub wrote:

Great last one is amazing here is 2 of my 1 2

Thanks!

CatOne

I like #3 the best... especially with the updated treatment.

Khaos

I have to disagree with most of the comments. I see #2 as the most interesting. The focus area and how the subject blends into and out of a very interesting and cool bokeh makes for a much superior photo over a technically nice but boring #3.

will-jum

CatOne wrote:

I like #3 the best... especially with the updated treatment.

Thank you.

Khaos wrote:

I have to disagree with most of the comments. I see #2 as the most interesting. The focus area and how the subject blends into and out of a very interesting and cool bokeh makes for a much superior photo over a technically nice but boring #3.

I think i agree, i've always liked #2 more =o! But it seems people are going for #3, down to personal prefrence i guess.

Elaine

I really like #2 as well. If I had not seen the new version of #3, I would have said #2 was my favorite. I think the new #3 is better than the old #3, but #2 is very nice!

will-jum

Elaine wrote:

I really like #2 as well. If I had not seen the new version of #3, I would have said #2 was my favorite. I think the new #3 is better than the old #3, but #2 is very nice!

Thank you!!