What should I do to improve this? Shot with a P&S (Nikon 5700).
Hey JT,
Both shots have the subject just about in the dead center. You normally want to avoid that. Assuming the flowers are still there go back and take a bunch of shots from different angles and perspectives. See what works for you.
One question I have is how do these shots look to you, what are you trying to show?
Your focus and details in these shots are fine BTW.
Harry http://behret.smugmug.com/NANPA member How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
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maybe play around with cropping out the mulch side of the flower bed and therefore placing flower off centre in the composition
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Both shots have the subject just about in the dead center. You normally want to avoid that. Assuming the flowers are still there go back and take a bunch of shots from different angles and perspectives. See what works for you.
One question I have is how do these shots look to you, what are you trying to show?
Your focus and details in these shots are fine BTW.
http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"