God's House
wfeller
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Very nice. I like the almost spotlight effect on the face.
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I'm afraid this shot doesn't really do it for me, I'm sorry.
I think it's too tightly cropped at the bottom, the corners of the building being exactly on/over the edge bother me a bit. Also, it's that you mention that it is a church; Because of the ultra wide angle, the cross on top of the building became very small, and definitely not something that would be the first thing to see. It would be nice if you could get that in focus somehow; At this time, my eyes just keep wandering around a bit, looking for something to focus on. Does that make sense?
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Thanks for your comments, something to think about.
I think that it would look better if the power lines, or whatever they are, were cropped out.
I agree. The top half is great. The bottom half of the shot has problems with the angles and the edge of the frame, and also the blown out sidwalk.
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