Update to the Eyes in Focus Attempts

itsaduck

So thanks to all of the great input here, I tried again. Much better results, not much more willing subjects, but hey. These are all shot with the 28-135 at 1/200 f/8, ISO 400 with the 580EX bounced off the ceiling again. Actually, the bathroom lights are off and the light is coming primarily from a large east facing window, boosted with the flash.

As eyes and focus in general were my main endeavor, I'm pretty happy with what I learned. Composition and portraiture is hard to come by with these camera-weary vets so that will be for another day.

Thanks again!
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Cheers to all and thanks in particular to those who provided me with suggestions :-)

evoryware

Much better.

yoyostock

Number 4 is a great shot! They look like they're hanging out in clouds.