Portrait of the Artist
This is my friend who is a novelist. The shot is one from a shoot for his last novel's author photo. This one was not the one chosen, but I think it is OK. He is a cool subject. BTW- He is Chuck Rosenthal, his book "Never Let Me Go" is very powerful stuff.
regards,
Gary
regards,
Gary
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Wow, one of my kin.
He is a good subject. The shot could be strengthened by using a little crop top and left to re-compose. He feels a bit like he's falling out of the frame. I also would add that you need to be careful not to clip your highlights in your B/W conversion.
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regards,
Gary
regards,
Gary
Try this technique, as quoted from Greg Gorman's site. The technique was developed by Rob Carr, I believe. It's awesome.
It's here. You need to go to the navigation bar, select Learn, and then click on the B/W Conversion tutorial. It'll download the PDF, so if you're on a slow connection, know that it's a download.
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Gary
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Gary
OK, I'm going to nit-pick.
The background IS better, but what I see is the reflection of the warm background against a now cool background, leaving me to wonder where the warm colors reflected on his face come from. I believe that this could be fixed with some careful PS work.
Other than that nit...nice work! Composition is better, background is more pleasing...
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I think this might be what you are thinking about.
Gary
Much better. I think you could still pull it back from the eyebrow through the hand. I still see the red reflected there, but yeah, right on.
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thanks so much,
Gary