Portraits c&c welcome

Little TLittle T Registered Users Posts: 170 Major grins
edited March 29, 2008 in People
Had my sister be test subject for a few shots so i had something to work with. Here is what i came up with just wondering if there is anything i should or shouldnt do editing wise. Still trying to get some skill with PS :D

1.
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2.
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Thanks in advance,

Jeremy.
http://jtrankler.smugmug.com
jtrankler@gmail.com
Canon 60D
Tamron 28-75 2.8
Canon 70-200 F4 L IS

Comments

  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,955 moderator
    edited March 29, 2008
    Hi Jeremy,

    I don't much care for the vignetting effect in these. I don't think it works in pics that are tall and narrow. I also think you should have left more room on the right in #1. Sorry if this sounds negative, but you asked for editing advice. :D

    Regards,
  • Little TLittle T Registered Users Posts: 170 Major grins
    edited March 29, 2008
    Richard wrote:
    Hi Jeremy,

    I don't much care for the vignetting effect in these. I don't think it works in pics that are tall and narrow. I also think you should have left more room on the right in #1. Sorry if this sounds negative, but you asked for editing advice. :D

    Regards,

    Thank you Richard, there is no need to appologize i want the advice let it be good or bad ;).

    Reason i did the effect like that is she thought it looked neat, as for the more room i wish i could of had it but there was a door right next to her and the angle of that shot didnt allow for more room. I wanted to move the chair so we could use the whole wall but she complained about sliding a chair 5feet :cry
    http://jtrankler.smugmug.com
    jtrankler@gmail.com
    Canon 60D
    Tamron 28-75 2.8
    Canon 70-200 F4 L IS
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