Tracks that could kill

will-jum

Just a landscape i was looking for some c&c on:

http://will-jum.deviantart.com/art/Tracks-...d-kill-82548198 (bigger image)


And some funs:

http://will-jum.deviantart.com/art/JuMp-82548427 (bigger image)


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nvr2low

the tilted horizon on the first one is a killer to me

will-jum

nvr2low wrote:

the tilted horizon on the first one is a killer to me

I don't know why people crnt cope with tilted horizon's, the field was on a hill, i left it as it was because it slants towards the clouds which emphasise's them. Imo it takes nothing away from the image.

gus

will-jum wrote:

I don't know why people crnt cope with tilted horizon's, the field was on a hill, i left it as it was because it slants towards the clouds which emphasise's them. Imo it takes nothing away from the image.

You asked for C&C..nvr2low gave you that in their opinion. You have to understand that nvr2low did what you asked for.

wholenewlight

Certainly an interesting and dramatic landscape. It caught my eye.

Same slight concern with the horizon - maybe just a little correction.

While I like dramatic scenes, the upper right corner looks a little "overcooked" to me - a little too artificial.

will-jum

gus wrote:

You asked for C&C..nvr2low gave you that in their opinion. You have to understand that nvr2low did what you asked for.

I know, i just never understand when people say the horizon ruins it, like they could at least explain why it ruins it...

will-jum

wholenewlight wrote:

Certainly an interesting and dramatic landscape. It caught my eye.

Same slight concern with the horizon - maybe just a little correction.

While I like dramatic scenes, the upper right corner looks a little "overcooked" to me - a little too artificial.

agreed about the right corner, thanks.

will-jum

#1 reworked, hope it's better!