I like the out of ordinary posings here. The selective color ruins the first. Personally, I'd leave the lips alone as the composition/pose stands on its own merit. Cool shots.
In the first and third, it looks like you are very close to having blown out areas where the light reflects off their forehead(s). Like already said below, nice variety in point of view. The second is my fav.
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I normally ike this look, but in this case, it just looks odd. I'd like to see the saturation of the lips toned down.
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I kind of thought the lips of #1 was over saturated I'll correct in photoshop this evening.
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