Your timing was a bit off, she was licking her lips in preparation for the shot.
This is a very nice shot.
Your sig catches my eye and is a distraction. I would suggest in this pic,
because of the vast white area, to place it closer to the corner and
lighten it up so it's just varely visable.
Your timing was a bit off, she was licking her lips in preparation for the shot.
This is a very nice shot.
Your sig catches my eye and is a distraction. I would suggest in this pic,
because of the vast white area, to place it closer to the corner and
lighten it up so it's just varely visable.
Great capture.
Al
That's what I'm talking about...good call, thanks. How's this?
That's what I'm talking about...good call, thanks. How's this?
Much better, now I can stare and hold my concentration. My dad had The Encycopedia of Photography volumes from back in the 40-50's and as a kid I spent many days reading about composition. I was most facinated by the way the eye flows around a picture. In your picture there was no connecting element from the main object to your sig but it stood out enough to grab my eye.
Again much nicer now, maybe too light, only needs to be light enough to not interfer.
Thanks for sharing,
Al
Excellent pic. I like the comp and the shallow DOF.
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This is a very nice shot.
Your sig catches my eye and is a distraction. I would suggest in this pic,
because of the vast white area, to place it closer to the corner and
lighten it up so it's just varely visable.
Great capture.
Al
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Again much nicer now, maybe too light, only needs to be light enough to not interfer.
Thanks for sharing,
Al
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How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"