candid's and natural light

jwear

I gave people shooting a try but flash and posing I did not like .So I gave this a try c/c welcome

jwear

this is the dancer

Qarik

I like the 2nd shot. Vibrant colors and decent lighting. But there is blurry green/blue something or other at the lower right hand corner which is distracting. Maybe crop it that out but don't cut off her "assets"

Mitchell

Jeff, I like #2. The lighting is nice, but the composition is a too centered and could be more interesting if you played with it.

#1 doesn't work for me. The lighting is too harsh coupled with the shadow that cuts across her face. Try again!

david-low

#2 looks good but definitely not #1 - quite a disaster to be honest as half of her eye were distracted by the harsh shadow.

jwear

thank you for the feed back yep outdoor candids you have no control over light -the blur is silk and it would have been better to crop it off .thanks again

bfjr

So you got a New Girl Friend ?? :ivar