My wife and kids

JDEORTA

I'm still trying to learn. C&C always aprreciated.

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#2



#3



#4


#5

Cason

Beautiful family!

I see you are working on the compo. This is much better than your senior shots. http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=93101

Try to get tighter (closer headshot). Change it up. It is OK to crop some of the head.

RE: #5... Crying or allergies?

JDEORTA

RTP wrote:

Beautiful family!

I see you are working on the compo. This is much better than your senior shots. http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=93101


Try to get tighter (closer headshot). Change it up. It is OK to crop some of the head.

RE: #5... Crying or allergies?

Thank you.

I tried the closer head shots too just wasn't sure about cutting part of the her head out.

RE:#5
The bright sunlight was making her eyes water, I had my son hold a diffuser to help out a bit.

Jeff_Milo

#'s 2 & 4 are my favorites, very nice, maybe just a touch shallower DOF. #2 could also use a little more pop, maybe more contrast or saturation. But as far as poses go I like them.

I like the attempted composition of #1, I would turn your daughter a little more towards the camera so she doesn't look squished.

On #3, good idea again, but I think you need to be shooting more directly down on them, I don't find the angle flattering

The angle on #5 bugs me

I do like the last pic you posted, I like the nice tight crop, her eyes are the focus of the shot so I dont mind cutting off her head. I also like the angle it was shot from, its different than I am used to seeing (might have to steal it) Its got a seductiveness to it IMO.

Good work, keep shooting and playing around with different poses. One thing I have had success with when shooting 2 or more people together is not so much posing them but putting them in a general position and then shoot the interaction between them.

Agnieszka

Great photos. I guess my only point would be to play a bit with the color palette. Some of the shots are a bit on the blue side .... (#2, 3, 5)

The last one is maybe a bit too close up / not very flattering, but that might be just my opinion

Well done

ShepsMom

1 and 2 are the best of the bunch, she's very pretty lady and children are adorable. #5 isn't working very well, may be the angle of the shot?

JDEORTA

Here's another one similar to #5


played around with #2 in photoshop

Jeff_Milo

I like the colors much better in the new version of number 2. Go buy the frame thats a keeper!! nice job :ivar

Rhinotherunt

Beautiful Family!!!

WB is a little off in a few, but still nice shots.

joshhuntnm

Agnieszka wrote:

Great photos. I guess my only point would be to play a bit with the color palette. Some of the shots are a bit on the blue side .... (#2, 3, 5)

The last one is maybe a bit too close up / not very flattering, but that might be just my opinion

Well done

I agree. Or, shoot them with the shade color balance.

anwmn1

Nice stuff and very cute family. Your wife's eyes are really fantastic in a couple of those shots.

I also noticed you are in the Phoenix area by ID'ing the rail bridges in Tempe.

If you need a photog to capture you in action on your next 4x adventure let me know.

JimmyZ

Cute family.

JDEORTA

anwmn1 wrote:

Nice stuff and very cute family. Your wife's eyes are really fantastic in a couple of those shots.

I also noticed you are in the Phoenix area by ID'ing the rail bridges in Tempe.

If you need a photog to capture you in action on your next 4x adventure let me know.

Yeah we were at Tempe town lake.

Do you have any suggestions on were else to go for pics?

I'll keep you in mind for the 4x4 pics:):