I agree with the color cast, seems slightly green to me.
There is a bit of shadowing under the eyes so you may want to dodge those areas to brighten the eyes a touch.
I'm not a fan of the horizontal composition. I would have gone tighter to get rid of all the negative space or better yet vertical and focused in more on the main point, the connection between the two subjects. Since you are cropping the hands and the top of the head, get in tighter, you don't have to have all of the head in a portrait. And instead of them looking at you, have them look at each other and interact.
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agree
no crop. 85mm glass and a small room. You mean, you don't like yellow?
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There is a bit of shadowing under the eyes so you may want to dodge those areas to brighten the eyes a touch.
I'm not a fan of the horizontal composition. I would have gone tighter to get rid of all the negative space or better yet vertical and focused in more on the main point, the connection between the two subjects. Since you are cropping the hands and the top of the head, get in tighter, you don't have to have all of the head in a portrait. And instead of them looking at you, have them look at each other and interact.
better?
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that will do
Glass: Sigma 70-200 f2.8 | Sigma 20 f1.8 | Canon 28-135 f3.5-5.6 IS USM
May be, a little correction of the white balance, would benefit the photo and give it a more natural ambiance.
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14-24 24-70 70-200mm (vr2)
85 and 50 1.4
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