Whatcha think?

KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
edited May 24, 2008 in People
Walking down our street, I decided to take a quick pic of this lil girl... Comments?


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~Katie~
:barb

http://www.kc1stphotography.com


2 Canon Rebel XSi
Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
2 Canon 14-55mm
Canon 55-250mm f4.0
Canon 580EX
Canon 580EX II

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  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    No comments?
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • ladytxladytx Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    Sweet looking little girl .. nice capture here.
    LadyTX
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    ladytx wrote:
    Sweet looking little girl .. nice capture here.

    Thanks, I was hoping someone would say something... lol, good or bad
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • SenecaSeneca Registered Users Posts: 1,661 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    Katie...it's good, however try and get full face images instead of half body images. JMHO.
  • super starsuper star Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    Good shot and light..... but I would like to see her full face and also.. did you check your White balance of your camera ?? image looks blueish...

    thumb.gif good work

    -Super star:davidto
    My Flickr:barb

    My Camera:ivar
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    My white balance was on outside sunshine.... I will try doing more headshots when I do a photoshoot.
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
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    how's this one?
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • super starsuper star Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    Cool....
    This kinda.. compositions make your photography to next level.... clap.gif Really good.

    --> BG yellow Distratcing alot since very close to subject... and also a wheel @ top.

    --> Green bouncing light on your subject face...(not really worse but next time take care...about it)


    Good attempt,,,,thumb.gif

    Super star :davidto
    My Flickr:barb

    My Camera:ivar
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    super star wrote:
    This kinda.. compositions make your photography to next level.... clap.gif Really good.

    --> BG yellow Distratcing alot since very close to subject... and also a wheel @ top.

    --> Green bouncing light on your subject face...(not really worse but next time take care...about it)


    Good attempt,,,,thumb.gif

    Super star :davidto



    How do I get rid of the green bouncing off her face? I didn't use a reflector or a flash. And that was trash behind her, we were cleaning. rolleyes1.gif
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • super starsuper star Registered Users Posts: 101 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    KTBoom2006-E510 wrote:
    How do I get rid of the green bouncing off her face? I didn't use a reflector or a flash. And that was trash behind her, we were cleaning. rolleyes1.gif

    Take a look at my Thread and tell me about my latest update...deal.gif
    My Flickr:barb

    My Camera:ivar
  • beetle8beetle8 Registered Users Posts: 677 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    I disagree with the full face crits on your first shot I think the comp is only slightly off but with the view you've give we get to see the jack in her hand which leads me into a story and I think that's a good thing. The color however is off in a bad way, the lilacs in the BG while out of the DOF should lend to the shot, but with the off WB the whole shot ends up losing. If you took this for a spin through photoshop it would be a definate keeper.

    Saddly on the second one all I see is the trash can if it were going to be a journalistic kind of "we're cleaning" shot then you woulda had to back out and get more of the scene. for a candid portrait a step to the left maybe trying to eliminate the BG
    - Keith
    Keith Tharp.com - Champion Photo
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    beetle8 wrote:
    I disagree with the full face crits on your first shot I think the comp is only slightly off but with the view you've give we get to see the jack in her hand which leads me into a story and I think that's a good thing. The color however is off in a bad way, the lilacs in the BG while out of the DOF should lend to the shot, but with the off WB the whole shot ends up losing. If you took this for a spin through photoshop it would be a definate keeper.

    Saddly on the second one all I see is the trash can if it were going to be a journalistic kind of "we're cleaning" shot then you woulda had to back out and get more of the scene. for a candid portrait a step to the left maybe trying to eliminate the BG


    Besides the trash and wheel, is the focus good? In my last pics everyone said it was out of focus... so did I get it this time? That's what I was actually trying to do with my photos right now is practice with focusing. I am a person to do one step at a time.... I know, pathetic....:crazy
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
  • ladytxladytx Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited May 23, 2008
    Focus looks fine to me but maybe run it through Photoshop once for that little extra zap. It may look fine in Photoshop though. I know my photos look very sharp in Photoshop and Lightroom but then when I open them up in Windows Explorer or upload them here they are no longer sharp ... oh my, oh my, what are we to do? ... I don't know ... lol ...rolleyes1.gif
    LadyTX
  • beetle8beetle8 Registered Users Posts: 677 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2008
    the focus on the first one is a little soft but it works with the shot the focus on #2 looks great.
    - Keith
    Keith Tharp.com - Champion Photo
  • KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2008
    beetle8 wrote:
    the focus on the first one is a little soft but it works with the shot the focus on #2 looks great.


    Thanks
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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