Moving foward -- in a different way

NikonsandVstroms

I have three different approaches for this subject and was looking for some input from all of you into how you feel they work.

The first is very literal in its sense of the movement through its direct representation of mass transit



These next three deal more with the implied movement of the viewer through the space that I've laid out

And finally this last image takes the idea away from the literal representation. It showing my hope to be able to move on from the medications that I take daily for the yet to be identified condition causing my pain.

Rockporters

I like the concept of the first photo but would like to see the T in 'forward' motion. The people themselves aren't really saying 'forward' to me.