Floating
Khaos
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Comments please. Like it, hate it, tell me what's right or wrong with it.
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I dont know what to tell ya about threads that go by un-noticed. It happens a lot to all of us (except Harry :crazy ). But then we cant all have an eagle and an Osprey that fight over the chance to be photographed.
I have a lot of threads I start only get one or two responses (or 0) and then once in a while I have one get lots of attention. I dont know why it happens, but it does. No biggie.
As far as the pic goes....
Hmmm.... what is it?
The texture on the ball at the top is cool. Your shot shows the texture well.
The background is nice and smooth. No distraction there.
The bottom portion looks like the top of a bottle with a cork in it? Well exposed and again nice texture.
You did a great job controling the depth of feild.
The title of the thread is "floating". If the idea is that the ball on top is floating above the bottle, I guess that is not hitting me. maybe a slightly lower angle would increase the illusion.
I am thinking a tighter crop to make it more abstract, or a wider one so that you can recognize the objects.
I also think it is a bit centered and a different composition might add the the positive aspects of the image.
Not trying to pic on yer pic, and after all wadda I know.
Thanks for sharring.
Now on to this photo. Overall, I find this shot kind of drab. It needs more contrast to help highlight the objects which just seem to blend into the similar background. There is also no great focal point, and I think it would help if the object was not smack in the middle.
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about the photo... i would really like to see it lit from below with some softer lighting. i think that might bring out the texture with some cool tones to boot.
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On the other hand lots of comments of course means you hit the mark, and maybe on several levels, very cool when that happens . But you didn't expect that on every shot did ya ?? :lol4
And one more thing I'm not much on people, still lifes, buildings etc. You know me from my posts I'm an amimal kinda guy, so I really have no expertise on the other aspects of photog. So unless a shot of the non animal really grabs me in some way, I usually don't comment, is that wrong ??
By the way did you reply on my last couple posts, I'll have to go chk :lol4 :lol4 :hide
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My point was not really about comments. It was more I'll post something at the same time as someone else, neither of us have any replies, but they will have 30+ views and I'll have maybe 15. That's my question.
Thanks again for the comments.
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Khaos - I know the feeling, I post an image that I shot and found appealing and processed to bring out its glory and duh, no one else seems to notice. Several views, but no responses. I usually take this to mean that they aren't really moved. Sometimes, people are just busy; sometimes they are reluctant to say anything bad. But a kind word about our efforts is always appreciated.
I think dgrin's friendly atmosphere is great, but I think it sometimes inhibits people from being as frank as they might. I'm not looking for snide remarks, but legitimate opinions about how I might do things better as I know you seriously are also.
Your image is kind of flat to me - the contrast is not full range, the colors are muted but the grey background color does not really contrast or add to the globular shape. I can't really see that it is floating either. The central composition does not entrigue my interest.
I think maybe stronger,more dramatic sidelighting would work better for this subject. I like simple geographic forms, they can be great subjects for photos, , but not with flat frontal lighting. Light is what creates great images, not interesting subjects of themselves. I keep having to relearn this lesson myself. Since I find the colors less than complementary, perhaps dramatic sidelighting and a swoop into the B&W world might help out.
Here is an exercise I posted last year to demonstrate a gradient background done in Photoshop for an image I shot with a P&S camera. I did use off the camera flash for lighting.
It didn't get rave reviews either, but I kind of enjoyed it and still do. Sometimes a simple, stark black background can be very effective also.
Sometimes a contrasting background can help, and sometimes a similar color background works ok too
And sometimes a run into B&W can be helpful
Feel free to criticize my images as freely as I have yours - maybe you can help me make mine better also. I hope these comments are considered as a constructive effort, and not a critical one. I know you desire honest responses and this I have tried to offer as I recognize your sincere effort to improve.
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So... about this shot. Umm, umm,... see, I don't know what to offer here. It doesn't really do anything for me. It's a sphere. Apparently a cork top? I'm interested in its construction material. I can't really determine what it is. It kinda blends into the background. A bit more interesting background or lighting/shadow effect might help that.
There isn't enough of the green bottle neck to make it interesting so it becomes a distraction.
Anyway, hope you don't mind me commenting. Cheers!
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