The ones of the baby girl are awesome. Her eyes twinkle and she has this look of wonder. #3 has a great body position and the model is giving a great face and she looks both glamourous and relaxed. The sun blots out her forehead, cheek and top. It might have been better to have her lay down. The sun can be a tricky mistress! I don't know much about photoshop but I'm sure these thigns can be fixed relatively easy. Without the sun slots the shot is very nice.
#6 is a little too close for me. She's in the same position for all three that I think she's been copy + pasted. You have to be careful with strong profile and jawlines, a beautiful girl with a strong nose and a full jaw can easily catch bad light.
These are things you see more and more as you photograph people. I don't have many photoshoots under my belt but I have been drawing people for years. Faces are tricky and you'll never have a perfect face on your hands. It always helps me to see shapes in their faces. If you see a triangle that's the key, you want to beef up that triangle with some shade and soft light and get some nice drama. A tringle is usually the top of the nose to the eyebrows. Make sense?
Beautiful! One nit-pick. Images 4 & 5 have single strands of hair that are just bugging me. First thing I saw when I viewed that image. Easy fix...just heal it out. Great job otherwise.
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I would like to tone down the bright spot in #3.
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#6 is a little too close for me. She's in the same position for all three that I think she's been copy + pasted. You have to be careful with strong profile and jawlines, a beautiful girl with a strong nose and a full jaw can easily catch bad light.
These are things you see more and more as you photograph people. I don't have many photoshoots under my belt but I have been drawing people for years. Faces are tricky and you'll never have a perfect face on your hands. It always helps me to see shapes in their faces. If you see a triangle that's the key, you want to beef up that triangle with some shade and soft light and get some nice drama. A tringle is usually the top of the nose to the eyebrows. Make sense?
Hope it was helpful, if at all coherent.
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