Downtown through a train car!

ParksonParkson Registered Users Posts: 35 Big grins
edited June 24, 2008 in Other Cool Shots
We were waiting for a train to pass and i was playing with black and white!!
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  • black mambablack mamba Registered Users Posts: 8,327 Major grins
    edited June 24, 2008
    I see a photo that's poorly exposed, poorly focused, lacking in compositional integrity, and generally not very interesting. Maybe I'm missing something.
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  • mackidbrendanmackidbrendan Registered Users Posts: 85 Big grins
    edited June 24, 2008
    black mamba wrote:
    I see a photo that's poorly exposed, poorly focused, lacking in compositional integrity, and generally not very interesting. Maybe I'm missing something.
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  • cmorganphotographycmorganphotography Registered Users Posts: 980 Major grins
    edited June 24, 2008
    Maybe if you embed it? Attaching photos does make a bad representation of photos, no matter how nice they are before the upload.

    I think you could use more contrast, based on what I see. Perhaps a dark sepia wash or some more sharpening. Play with some colours. I know what you were going for but we need a little more perspective, more oomph to get there?
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