Hello dgrinners ! That's my studio photo. Taken by Nikon D200 and Nikkor 24-85. One studio flash used ( the second one was overheated )
Converted with Captude NX and processed with PS.
Thanx
I like the idea, composition and sharpness. Have some ideas for you, though: Should have either allowed that second light to cool and then placed it to scene left and used it as fill - or used a reflector - to better define her hair, backside and legs. Her feet have disappeared into the shadows and her shoes, making it look like she's standing on pegs. Then, pull the rope on the floor a bit more to scene left so that it doesn't hide her right foot. Personally the burned out rope doesn't bother me, but burn in her left hand.
Use a slightly shallower depth of field to avoid the texture of the background paper. Also, I like how the light on the paper follows the rope out of scene. That's nice.
I love the concept and the pin-up style. She's a knock-out model with great expressions and a lovely retro look! It's a beautiful picture, and will be a fantastic one when you seperate her from the background.
All in all, considering this was done with only one light, it came out great!
"If you've found a magic that does something for you, honey, stick to it. Never change it." - Mae West, to Edith Head.
"Every guy has to have one weakness - and it might as well be a good one." - Shell Scott: Dance With the Dead by Richard S. Prather
I like the idea, composition and sharpness. Have some ideas for you, though: Should have either allowed that second light to cool and then placed it to scene left and used it as fill - or used a reflector - to better define her hair, backside and legs. Her feet have disappeared into the shadows and her shoes, making it look like she's standing on pegs. Then, pull the rope on the floor a bit more to scene left so that it doesn't hide her right foot. Personally the burned out rope doesn't bother me, but burn in her left hand.
Use a slightly shallower depth of field to avoid the texture of the background paper. Also, I like how the light on the paper follows the rope out of scene. That's nice.
I love the concept and the pin-up style. She's a knock-out model with great expressions and a lovely retro look! It's a beautiful picture, and will be a fantastic one when you seperate her from the background.
All in all, considering this was done with only one light, it came out great!
Thank you for your point of view ! Will try to satisfy you in next posts
Thank you for your point of view ! Will try to satisfy you in next posts
Only two people need to be satisfied: yourself and your client. I see great images from you coming soon! Keep it up, DVDM! You're off to a great start!
"If you've found a magic that does something for you, honey, stick to it. Never change it." - Mae West, to Edith Head.
"Every guy has to have one weakness - and it might as well be a good one." - Shell Scott: Dance With the Dead by Richard S. Prather
Only two people need to be satisfied: yourself and your client. I see great images from you coming soon! Keep it up, DVDM! You're off to a great start!
Well, not to be an instigator.....take a look at his website....some of the most inspiring studio portraits I've seen in a long time...he's incredibly gifted.
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Use a slightly shallower depth of field to avoid the texture of the background paper. Also, I like how the light on the paper follows the rope out of scene. That's nice.
I love the concept and the pin-up style. She's a knock-out model with great expressions and a lovely retro look! It's a beautiful picture, and will be a fantastic one when you seperate her from the background.
All in all, considering this was done with only one light, it came out great!
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"Every guy has to have one weakness - and it might as well be a good one." - Shell Scott: Dance With the Dead by Richard S. Prather
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Thank you very much ! And... you was the first to comment my photo at SmugMug !!!
Thank you for your point of view ! Will try to satisfy you in next posts
Thank you !
Thank you ! Спасибо большое
Hey, you already have great shots at your www ! And yes, D200 is very good camera
Thank you very much !
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Thank you, I like pin-up too and try to shoot it regulary
Only two people need to be satisfied: yourself and your client. I see great images from you coming soon! Keep it up, DVDM! You're off to a great start!
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"If you've found a magic that does something for you, honey, stick to it. Never change it." - Mae West, to Edith Head.
"Every guy has to have one weakness - and it might as well be a good one." - Shell Scott: Dance With the Dead by Richard S. Prather
Well, not to be an instigator.....take a look at his website....some of the most inspiring studio portraits I've seen in a long time...he's incredibly gifted.
NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
www.daveswartz.com
Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552