Don Ricklin - Gear: Canon EOS 5D Mark III, was Pentax K7
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I like the lighting and the clouds are just spectacular but the composition is severly lacking here.
The horizon line is very tilted and it is hard to determine what is the main focus point- the old building or the tree blocking it??
I think if you would have moved either to the left or to the right and place the tree to one side of the building it would have been significantly better.
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Lots of drama.
Don
'I was older then, I'm younger than that now' ....
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I like the lighting and the clouds are just spectacular but the composition is severly lacking here.
The horizon line is very tilted and it is hard to determine what is the main focus point- the old building or the tree blocking it??
I think if you would have moved either to the left or to the right and place the tree to one side of the building it would have been significantly better.
Aaron Newman
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Thank you Arvan. 10mm.