You did a pretty good job of exposing the face in the first two despite the harsh light, but both have blown shoulders and hair and a distracting shadow cast by her head. Comp and color look OK. 3 and 4 are probably my favorites. You might want to dial back on the blur some, especially in 3. I like the conversion in 5. At first I thought she was eight feet tall, till I noticed that it was the same window niche as in 4. The pose looks a little stiff to me.
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You did a pretty good job of exposing the face in the first two despite the harsh light, but both have blown shoulders and hair and a distracting shadow cast by her head. Comp and color look OK. 3 and 4 are probably my favorites.
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