I like the 1st two. Very vribrant and well composed. The 3rd one is good as well except the for the shadows around the eyes...great color though. The 4th doesn't do it for me at all.
I think the last one can be a bit improved by dimming the highlights and softening/fixing the skin. I'm not talking "going barbie", but the side lighting is known to emphasize every tiny bump (think moon terminator! ), so you hotta be very carefull, especially on the closeups.
I also have a gut feeling the WB is a bit on a cold/bluish side (except #2), unless she has an exteremely pale skin (yet again, #2 looks normal) . I don't have a PS here at work at the time, so I can't check the numbers. It's also possible that you did that on purpose (or had it as a side effect) when you cranked the vibrance/saturation/contrast up.
The first one screams Little Purple Riding Hood and I just adore her eyes and make up. I like the lighting and the graffiti wall, too.
I have a feeling all the impurities on her forehead and cheeks could be touched up and make the picture less, "too close" and "old looking."
She looks stressed out in the last one.
Very awesome colours! Punchy and dramatic!
#3 LUV! the fabric. The pattern the fade dye. OMG, beautiful.
The first one screams Little Purple Riding Hood and I just adore her eyes and make up. I like the lighting and the graffiti wall, too.
I have a feeling all the impurities on her forehead and cheeks could be touched up and make the picture less, "too close" and "old looking."
She looks stressed out in the last one.
Very awesome colours! Punchy and dramatic!
#3 LUV! the fabric. The pattern the fade dye. OMG, beautiful.
she was a little stressed out, it was around 10:30 in the morning and she had an exam at 12pm! lol
i agree, i coulda edited the 'impurities' on her forehead.. but lazy me, just ignored it.. lol
she was a little stressed out, it was around 10:30 in the morning and she had an exam at 12pm! lol
i agree, i coulda edited the 'impurities' on her forehead.. but lazy me, just ignored it.. lol
No worries. Maybe she's facing the big bad wolf in the last one. "Grandma, what big eyes you have!"
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I really like the last one - but I like really tight portraits! Well done - for whatever my vote might be worth.:D
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Very colorful! Nice model, too!
I think the last one can be a bit improved by dimming the highlights and softening/fixing the skin. I'm not talking "going barbie", but the side lighting is known to emphasize every tiny bump (think moon terminator!
I also have a gut feeling the WB is a bit on a cold/bluish side (except #2), unless she has an exteremely pale skin (yet again, #2 looks normal) . I don't have a PS here at work at the time, so I can't check the numbers. It's also possible that you did that on purpose (or had it as a side effect) when you cranked the vibrance/saturation/contrast up.
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thanks for sharing.
Z.
I have a feeling all the impurities on her forehead and cheeks could be touched up and make the picture less, "too close" and "old looking."
She looks stressed out in the last one.
Very awesome colours! Punchy and dramatic!
#3 LUV! the fabric. The pattern the fade dye. OMG, beautiful.
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she was a little stressed out, it was around 10:30 in the morning and she had an exam at 12pm! lol
i agree, i coulda edited the 'impurities' on her forehead.. but lazy me, just ignored it.. lol
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These colors are amazing, they have a fantastic pop. Love the crops.
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