Fly #2

windoze · June 16, 2005

not as detailed, but i was after composition.....
opinions welcomed!
troy

TristanP · June 16, 2005

Works for me. I like it.

bfjr · June 17, 2005

Looked at it scrolled away came back
1st thing came to mind was a little more contrast, otherwise another winner

Lord Vetinari · June 17, 2005

Yup like it a lot- as previously mentioned think it would be better if darkened a tad.

Brian V.

nzmacro · June 17, 2005

You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one

Danny.

Dee · June 17, 2005

Ditto what Danny said

nzmacro wrote:

You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one

Danny.

This would make a lovely print as is, soft colors, iridescent glimmers on the wings of the fly -- but for the web, I'd pump up the contrast just a little.

I really love the colors, and the tip of the leaf leading away from the fly brings the eye back to the fly --

Fly #2

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