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Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
edited October 13, 2009 in Street and Documentary
Came across this dad and toddler in the park. He, sitting on a bench, and she standing in front lecturing on some unknown topic. Though he was trying quite hard, he obviously was having a hard time understanding her. I think the first (cropped) image is a better composition than #2 but would like your opinion.

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Jack
(My real name is John but Jack'll do)

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    adbsgicomadbsgicom Registered Users Posts: 3,615 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I like the tighter crop. Too bad a little more of her face isn't visible, I'm sure she had a lot of earnest in what she was trying to explain...
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    Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited October 12, 2009
    I like both of them
    nice picture.mwink.gif
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    RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,928 moderator
    edited October 13, 2009
    I prefer the uncropped version. Seeing more of the bodies seems to convey more of a sense of connection between the two. I barely noticed the pointing hand in the first version, but somehow it became more important in the second.
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    Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    adbsgicom wrote:
    I like the tighter crop. Too bad a little more of her face isn't visible, I'm sure she had a lot of earnest in what she was trying to explain...

    Hi Andrew
    I did the tighter crop to emphasize the quizzical expression on the father's face. The little girl's face and hair were extremely fair and required a lot of PP to bring out what little detail there was.

    Jack
    (My real name is John but Jack'll do)
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    Jack'll doJack'll do Registered Users Posts: 2,977 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2009
    I like both of them
    nice picture.mwink.gif

    Thank you Awais.
    Take care.

    Jack
    (My real name is John but Jack'll do)
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